From 2fc5345e2898dd136ea9f144a1c617080e5ec2cd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: PG <101947219+EclecticSamurai@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sat, 17 Aug 2024 16:40:48 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Update organisation.astro

---
 src/pages/membership/organisation.astro | 41 +++++++++----------------
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 27 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/pages/membership/organisation.astro b/src/pages/membership/organisation.astro
index b24f667..86c4494 100644
--- a/src/pages/membership/organisation.astro
+++ b/src/pages/membership/organisation.astro
@@ -18,8 +18,7 @@ import OrganisationTableMobile from "../../components/OrganisationTableMobile.as
       <div class="flex flex-col gap-2">
         <h1 class="mb-[0px]">organisation membership</h1>
         <span class="">
-          Instead of proposing partnerships for every event and/or
-          initiative,
we decided to implement a continuous membership approach.
+          Rather than one-time deals for single events or projects, we strive for long-term, consistent collaboration to achieve a lasting impact together.
         </span>
       </div>
       <div class="relative w-full border-b border-gray-950">
@@ -28,7 +27,7 @@ import OrganisationTableMobile from "../../components/OrganisationTableMobile.as
             Benefits
           </span>
           <ul class="list-disc ml-[18px] text-white">
-            <li>Visibility at our Summits, Meetups & Hackathons</li>
+            <li>Greater Exposure: ensure visibility and direct networking with key players at all our events [Congresses, Summits, Meetups, and Hackathons].</li>
             <li>Free Tickets for team and discounts for your partners</li>
             <li>
               Finding right builders for your beta, product to test or develop
@@ -64,11 +63,10 @@ import OrganisationTableMobile from "../../components/OrganisationTableMobile.as
           Why membership?
         </p>
         <ul class="list-decimal ml-[18px] text-white">
-          <li>Help to meet our respective specific and market needs</li>
-          <li>Avoid wasting time and resources.</li>
+          <li>Avoid wasting time and resources</li>
+          <li>Leverage our combined ecosystems and activities</li>
           <li>
-            Guarantee visibility and services by leveraging all our ecosystem
-            and activities, and to structure a common growth path.
+            Drive consistent collaboration to achieve lasting impact
           </li>
         </ul>
       </div>
@@ -78,24 +76,16 @@ import OrganisationTableMobile from "../../components/OrganisationTableMobile.as
         </p>
         <ul class="list-decimal ml-[18px] text-white">
           <li>
-            We care about our independence being an open-source &
-            community-driven organisation.
+            We are an open-source & community-driven organization that empowers privacy and freedom.
           </li>
           <li>
-            We don’t work for any company, but collaborate with them. The last
-            decision always on us.
+            We care about our independence and value collaboration over competition.
           </li>
           <li>
-            Perfect match is a partner who cares about privacy market growth &
-            support advocacy. Together we can growth.
+            We don’t work for any company, we collaborate with them.
           </li>
         </ul>
       </div>
-      <div>
-        <p>
-          This enable not just integrity of our work, but increase trust to both
-          W3PN activities & partner representation.
-        </p>
       </div>
       <div>
         <img src="/engine.png" alt="" class="w-full" />
@@ -107,34 +97,31 @@ import OrganisationTableMobile from "../../components/OrganisationTableMobile.as
         <div>
           <p>MAJOR</p>
           <p class="text-white font-bold text-[18px] leading-[1.6rem]">
-            #1 Privacy-centric think tank behind critical advocacy ecosystem
+            Become the leading privacy-centric think-tank driving critical ecosystem advocacy.
           </p>
           <p>
-            “L2beat for privacy” aka Explorer, the biggest privacy-services DB,
-            privacy reports & researches, essential summits & meetups
           </p>
         </div>
         <div>
           <p>SUB</p>
           <ul class="list-disc ml-[18px] text-white">
             <li>
-              <span class="font-bold"> 10M annual reach </span>(socials, media,
+              <span class="font-bold"> 10 Million annual reach </span>(socials, media,
               events)
             </li>
             <li>
-              <span class="font-bold"> 2000 events visitors </span>(incl 100
+              <span class="font-bold"> 2500 events visitors </span>(incl 100
               privacy leaders)
             </li>
             <li>
-              <span class="font-bold"> 50 contributors </span> (beyond core team)
+              <span class="font-bold"> 100+ contributors within the community </span> (beyond core team)
             </li>
           </ul>
         </div>
         <div>
           <p class="text-white font-bold text-[18px]">Our Activities</p>
           <p>
-            Our activities are multispectral as we want to improve privacy
-            alltogetgher.
+            Find [here](https://docs.web3privacy.info/research/) the full list of our projects and activities. [Read](mirror.xyz/0x0f1F3DAf416B74DB3DE55Eb4D7513a80F4841073/2X5hLw_7JcY3ifY9rv2qjo96HOcdni7DXqam9W_X6Kg) our delivery report for Q2 2024.
           </p>
         </div>
         <div>
@@ -174,7 +161,7 @@ import OrganisationTableMobile from "../../components/OrganisationTableMobile.as
           }
 
           <span class="text-white">
-            For Tier breakdown and details please write us
+            For Tier breakdown and details write us today
             <a href="mailto:web3privacynow@protonmail.com" class="underline"
               >web3privacynow@protonmail.com</a
             >