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 # Manifesto
 
-**Web3privacy Now** is a think-and-do-tank dedicated to foster research, tools & education within privacy x Web3 industry.
+## Our Mission: Pioneering Privacy in the Web3 Era
 
-We aggregate knowledge and people, produce research and market reports, train builders & explore potential use-cases, deliver new privacy concepts and tools.
+**Web3privacy Now** is a think-and-do-tank to foster knowledge and collaboration, produce insightful research and market reports, train builders, explore potential use-cases, and develop innovative privacy concepts and tools.
 
 ![Web3Privacy Now Manifesto](./assets/manifesto-banner.png)
 
-# Not every privacy has been empowered equally.
+# The Challenge: Equal Empowerment of Privacy
 
-Connected humans are commodified & surveil 24/7 without even realizing it. 
+In a world where connected humans are constantly commodified and surveilled, often unknowingly, there exists a pressing need for change. 
 
-Web3 industry has a unique chance to promote data, privacy & security literacy. Becoming a lifelong educational partner for humans.
+Web3 stack is uniquely positioned to champion data, privacy, and security literacy. Serving as a lifelong educational partner for people everywhere.
 
-Knowledge is a key to returning agency to humans in a hyperconnected world.  
+Empowering individuals with knowledge is key to restoring their agency in our hyperconnected reality.
  
-# How
+# Our Approach:
 
-**Advocacy**
+**Advocacy** 
 - **Educate**: Facilitate education via frameworks, 101 master classes, lectures & guides (for both general & tech public)
 - **Research**: Build foundation blocks for the industry: standards, projects' database, best practices, ethics
 - **Partner**: Outreach journalists, institutions, researchers, white hackers, and data economy academics & engage them in private topics
 - **Workspace**: Promote privacy as a work of the future top-of-mind career choice in web3
 
 **Collaboration**
-- Facilitate a community around web3 privacy
+- Build a community centered around web3 privacy
 - Contribute to industrial reports & surveys
 - Initiate new hackathons, lectures, and events for builders & product managers
-- Amplify knowledge sharing between privacy companies
+- Amplify knowledge sharing and collaboration between privacy companies
 - Connect traditional data & privacy experts with web3 leaders
 
 **Tooling**
-- Support products that preserve privacy
+- Champion products that prioritize privacy
-- Advocate for an open-source development
+- Advocate for open-source development
 - Promote humanistic UX/UI-culture
 - Support cutting-edge R&D projects
 
 # **Ultimate goal**
 
-**To make humans gain control over their privacy by utilizing Web3 stack.**
+**Empowering individuals to take control of their digital privacy through the Web3 stack.**
 
-_So privacy would become a conscious choice (active lifestyle) & be accessible to everyone worldwide._
+_We envision a world where privacy is a conscious, actively chosen lifestyle, accessible to everyone, everywhere._